feedback from test screening

Mise en scene: naturalistic, good mise en scene location & costume wise, lighting good for mood.

Area for improvement: some of the shots are confusing, no titles, dont get the props.

Camerawork: good point of view of shots, good variety of shots.

Area for improvement: sometimes shakey when the shot should be still.

Editing: good fades and transitions.

Area for improvement: Edit, colours and colour correlation.

Sound: the use of language is very relevent to the genre

Area for improvement: there could include a soundtrack in the background because in some footage all you can hear is the birds.

LEVEL 2- 30 MARKS